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Finally able to go back and read through all of these posts. Incredibly helpful advice. Thanks Joyce! 💜

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This is incredible example of headlines, subs and entry point for Substack Joyce. I LOVE the before and after examples and your criteria. Way to put the workshop into immediate practice.

You can see the difference immediately. Thanks for sharing the learning in real time.

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I agree with Kim! I just finished hearing Sarah’s recording and haven’t tried my own revisions yet. Yours are amazing, Joyce! I like the concrete facts you’re adding to headlines.

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Thanks for your feedback and restacking! I love this learning curve.

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Thanks for sharing!

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